"The Visitants" - a level 1 DCC RPG adventure

[Zeiros]

Wasnt sure where to post this but here is a "one room dungeon" I cooked up as a segue for my players between official modules.
The playtest write up and fully written out adventure are on the blog, if any one likes it and gives it
a go. please let me know. You probably want to read the adventure first, then the playtest, thou I posted them the other way around.

[ragboy]

I like it!

[IronWolf]

I saw the blog post yesterday. I liked it and thought it was very cool.

[beermotor]

I like this a lot, too, the vibe and the atmosphere is pretty neat. But man, your spelling (or typing) sucks bad.

If you polished up your grammar and spelling, you could probably sell a small collection of these (like, 5 to a book?). Of course, you could also recruit an editor. I'll do it for a free copy of whatever the final product is. !

[Zeiros]

I like this a lot, too, the vibe and the atmosphere is pretty neat. But man, your spelling (or typing) sucks bad.

If you polished up your grammar and spelling, you could probably sell a small collection of these (like, 5 to a book?). Of course, you could also recruit an editor. I'll do it for a free copy of whatever the final product is. !

Thanks all, and you're right beermotor..I didnt edit that as I should have apologies- (time , kids over the shoulder, etc)
I was contacted about including "The Visitants" an upcoming 3PP book, so I have pulled it by request. Hopefully you'll see it somewhere soon, properly edited. I do have two more of these "one room, one shots" in the planning stages.

[beermotor]

Good deal. I'm happy to edit for you if you want. Also, my group could playtest.