This is really good. It has a Princess of Mars vibe that I'm digging.
Thanks! Working on patrons/gods and a slight modification to make a semi-psionic magic system. I've only gotten this far...Mind Science
The Indomitable Empire of the Mystic Vril practices a pseudo-science of mutation, biological manufacturing, and mind control. Though the wizard need not have a patron to learn these mystical methods, practicing under a master provides the wizard with more powerful processes. All of the sentient races of Fhere practice some form of mind science, though it is rare to find anyone beyond the skill of an amateur.
Mind Science Patrons and Masters
Rhy-San – Arachno-man Master of the mind sciences (Arachno-man Enclave – 1903)
Verita – Dimensional being worshipped as a god by some slaves
Gobi-Tarn – Arachno-man hero ascendant
Urbik – Vril rebel hero ascendantClerics and Religion
As with magical patrons, the gods of Fhere are weak in the teeth of the Vril invasion, but they can be found amongst the arachno-men, rat lords, sliver, krake and isolated tribes of humans, elves, dwarves and halflings that have been stranded here over the years. It is whispered that even the gods of other worlds can be contacted from Fhere, though it is also whispered that the Vril can hear these prayers and pinpoint the worshipper. Gods and Patrons of Fhere
Fhere was a planet dominated by the Gok (a humanoid rat-like race), the Sliver (a race of serpentine humanoids) and the Krake (a lizard-like humanoid species). Though these were all but destroyed by the Vril, their gods remain, especially in the isolated enclaves where these species still cling to existence.
The Earth Lord of the Gok (Rat Lords)
Dark Queen of the Sliver
The Serpent in the World (Sliver and Krake)
The Broken Man (the broken moon of Fhere)The Vril Techno-Deities
The Indomitable Empire of the Mystic Vril brought their own gods, of a sort, with them when they invaded and enslaved the planet of Fhere. These are the entities worshipped by the Vril masters, and some of their creations, and can be taken as patrons or as deities, though only by the stout of heart and soft of mind!
The Steel God
The Mind Lord
Lord of FormsElder Beings
The rich source of cosmitronic energy has drawn powerful beings with no ties to the cosmology and culture of Fhere. Worship or patronage of these beings is extremely dangerous – in an existential sense.
Of the Innsmouth Dagons.
A dimensional being of sunny disposition
The Faceless Star
A living star that wanders the Universe
A dimensional being that must have cosmitronic energy to exist