Hi All,
Breaking into self-publishing this year, and that includes modules for DCCrpg.
Thing is, I could use some expert feedback from folks in the know. Anyone I know is someone I've usually taught how to game, or who "doesn't know writing", so it's hard to get outside opinions.
Anyone interested in taking a look at something I've been working on, and giving me some feedback? Doesn't have to be full-on editing, just "I like this" or "ugh". Make sense?
Module Feedback?
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Re: Module Feedback?
You can flip it my way if you want. ravencrowking at hotmail dot com.
SoBH pbp:
Cathbad the Meek (herbalist Wizard 1): AC 9; 4 hp; S 7, A 7, St 10, P 17, I 13, L 8; Neutral; Club, herbs, 50' rope, 50 cp; -1 to melee attack rolls. Hideous scar.
Cathbad the Meek (herbalist Wizard 1): AC 9; 4 hp; S 7, A 7, St 10, P 17, I 13, L 8; Neutral; Club, herbs, 50' rope, 50 cp; -1 to melee attack rolls. Hideous scar.
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Re: Module Feedback?
Sweet! Let me finish up some rooms/details and I'll send it your way.
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I can also take a look: paul at caffeine dot net.
AKA Paul Wolfe
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The Mystic Bull: Check out our two FREE prehistoric adventures: The Steading of the Nergalites AND The Tribe of Ogg and the Gift of Suss
In the Prison of the Squid Sorcerer (PDF) and softcover: 12 Short Adventures for DCC!
The God-Seed Awakens: 3rd Level Adventure for DCC. New patron, new spells, lots of new monsters and the living weapons of the Empire of Thal!
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Re: Module Feedback?
And if you want some word-smithery performed on the manuscript down the road, drop me a line.
http://savageafterworld.blogspot.com/20 ... ith-3.html
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http://savageafterworld.blogspot.com/20 ... ith-3.html
gameagain at gmail dot com
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Re: Module Feedback?
Great!
Copies forthcoming. I've been tinkering this whole time, and just want it to be perfect... before feedback tears it apart...
expect an email from:
elias at fireinthedust dot com
Copies forthcoming. I've been tinkering this whole time, and just want it to be perfect... before feedback tears it apart...
expect an email from:
elias at fireinthedust dot com