Ok, I will try posting here since it seems no one looked at the other thread.
Yesterday I received the book in the mail, and I have been reading it all day. I must say: BRILLIANT WORK! I do not even play 4e (I had the 4e books and sold them), but this one makes me want to run a 4e game again. I might pick up the game again
I like the layout, and how stat blocks are not repeated too many times (one thing that put me off the new edition, at least in the WotC adventure modules), though 3 or 4 pages could have been saved considering that all the monsters are also in the back of the book, and it's suggested to photocopy the pages anyway. It could have been worse, I suppose
I also like how the whole module only uses the PHB, though the pregen druid is a bit out of place IMO. Perhaps I will change the character with a fey pact warlock.
I also have some questions:
1- Is there a background for the pregens? Something which ties them to Iparsia (e.g. what's their culture)? As they stand, they are just a bunch of numbers, quite in contrast with all the rest.
2- What about the pdf?
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3- I cannot understand where the refugees are supposed to go. Do they pass through the keep before the PCs get there?